Hi!

I'm totally new to this site, but I want to share my work with you. Why? Because I need professional commentary.

Few words about me: I like drawing, it is my hobby (but I discovered it recently) and I want to be better at this. I have found some really nice artworks (for example some matte paintings) and those pictures motivate me to work on my abilities. But if I try to paint something similar from my mind, it is just meh (I attached my very first painting that I drew form my imaginary). I know I need more practice, but I don't know how and where to begin. I need your help.

Crit this picture please. It is my very first artwork, and I would like to know what do you like and what you dislike, what I need to work on.

Thanks in advance for your help .If you can help me, I won't quit painting, so see you soon :)