A girl asked me to revise her drawing (the first one). She's doing great on creating the vibe, but there are some big problems I found. For example, the subject is too small, color kind of burned, and human body gesture too stiff. 

According to those shortages on her painting, I redraw one for her. 

Before                                                                                                   After

I put the main subject (the girl) in the middle, create the triangular composition. And make her body gesture looks more dynamic, like pulled by these vines. Then I darken the back group to standout the light and the hand that save her.